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The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph gives information about the yearly
income
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 levels of families living in America in the years 2015, 2011 and 2007.
Overall
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, all the groups increased their
income
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 levels, except one and two of them showed nearly no change in all years. There are large gaps between the households with the 2 highest incomes
in
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apply
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every year, the second highest
income
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 group remained around 15 thousand households and slightly less in all years,
while
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 incomes over a hundred thousand exceeded 30 million by 2015. People with the least
income
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 started the period with exactly 25 million,
rose
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which rose
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 to just under 30 million in 2011, before falling slightly from that number in 2015.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words income with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • household distribution
  • income brackets
  • annual income
  • percentage change
  • trend analysis
  • income group
  • significant increase/decrease
  • steady growth/decline
  • fluctuations
  • compared to
  • in contrast
  • notably
  • median income
  • poverty line
  • economic factors
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