The chart below gives attendance figures for Grandville Stadium from 2017, which are projected through 2030 after a major improvement project. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
bar chart illustrates the number of individuals who attended in
Grandville Stadium after massive Change preposition
apply
imporovements
in 2017, Correct your spelling
improvements
improvement
2020
, and predictions for 2030.
Correct word choice
and 2020
Overall
, it can be seen that the number of audiances
who went to Sporting Events in 2017 and 2020 was dramatically more than other events, Correct your spelling
audiences
audience
moreover
, it will be even more by the year 2030.
To begin
with, the number of people who went in
Theater in 2017 was approximately 10000 and stayed almost the same in 2020, Change preposition
into
however
it will rise Add the comma(s)
however,
substantionally
in 2023, and it is going to be roughly 50000.
For sporting events, we can see Correct your spelling
substantially
and
in 2017 and 2020 the numbers Correct word choice
that
was
really close to each other. In 2017 it was under 150000, and increased gradually in 2020Change the verb form
were
Change preposition
to
Also
they predicted that it will Add a comma
Also,
has
a slight increase in 2023.
And Change the verb form
have
finally
concerts, in 2017 it was under 50000 and then
rocketed significantly in 2020. In 2030 we will witnees
a dramatical rise.Correct your spelling
witness
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