The chart below gives attendance figures for Grandville Stadium from 2017, which are projected through 2030 after a major improvement project. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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bar chart illustrates the number of individuals who attended

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Grandville Stadium after massive

imporovements

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improvements

improvement

in 2017,

2020

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and 2020

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, and predictions for 2030.

Overall

, it can be seen that the number of

audiances

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audiences

audience

who went to Sporting Events in 2017 and 2020 was dramatically more than other events,

moreover

, it will be even more by the year 2030.

To begin

with, the number of people who went

in

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Theater in 2017 was approximately 10000 and stayed almost the same in 2020,

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it will rise

substantionally

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substantially

in 2023, and it is going to be roughly 50000. For sporting events, we can see

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in 2017 and 2020 the numbers

was

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really close to each other. In 2017 it was under 150000, and increased gradually in 2020

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a little above 15000.

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they predicted that it will

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a slight increase in 2023. And

finally

concerts, in 2017 it was under 50000 and

then

rocketed significantly in 2020. In 2030 we will

witnees

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witness

a dramatical rise.