A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, •explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday •describe some possible disadvantages •say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

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Dear Sam, It is good to hear from you after the

last

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meetup we had at Jane’s, and hope you keeping well. I am very excited to learn that you are thinking of going camping

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summer,

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being your first time I believe there would be plenty of things that you do as a first time. Apart from the scenery, you would

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be able to look at the wildlife around the campsite, and

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escape the busy and noisy city life, which I believe you would definitely enjoy.

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, I must warn you of a few drawbacks of camping, which some might think of as showstoppers.

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, if you plan to camp for more than two days straight, you would need to pack some clothes and saucepans. Another thing point is that, at night there will be a lot of mosquitoes around and you must be ready for that, you can survive their attacks by taking an insect repellant spray with you, and

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, there might be some places where you might not get cellular reception as well.

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, I am really pleased that you thinking of

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a plan and if it is okay with you, I would be happy to join you. I hope I was able to give you some pointers and looking forward to your say on me joining you. Best wishes, Rob.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

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231 words

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