A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, •explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday •describe some possible disadvantages •say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

Dear Sam, It is good to hear from you after the
last
meetup we had at Jane’s, and hope you keeping well. I am very excited to learn that you are thinking of going camping
this
summer,
although
being your first time I believe there would be plenty of things that you do as a first time. Apart from the scenery, you would
also
be able to look at the wildlife around the campsite, and
not to mention
escape the busy and noisy city life, which I believe you would definitely enjoy.
However
, I must warn you of a few drawbacks of camping, which some might think of as showstoppers.
Firstly
, if you plan to camp for more than two days straight, you would need to pack some clothes and saucepans. Another thing point is that, at night there will be a lot of mosquitoes around and you must be ready for that, you can survive their attacks by taking an insect repellant spray with you, and
finally
, there might be some places where you might not get cellular reception as well.
Nonetheless
, I am really pleased that you thinking of
such
a plan and if it is okay with you, I would be happy to join you. I hope I was able to give you some pointers and looking forward to your say on me joining you. Best wishes, Rob.
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