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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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Nowadays, most
people
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 usually follow the trends of
products
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.
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,
finally
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, we become similar to others and
this
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 is a phenomenon which happens all over the world. In my opinion,
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 development has a negative interaction towards the
people
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.
To begin
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 with, almost every country sells the same things for every type of item.
For instance
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,
products
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 for home, clothes and whatever you can search. Someone can tell that
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 is very useful because you needn't travel to far destinations to find something that you want.
In addition
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, it is right for all
people
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 to have access to the same
products
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 and to find them easily because all humanity should have the same rights.
On the other hand
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,
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 massification can affect the culture of each country. By buying the same clothes or, generally, the same items it is possible for
people
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 to forget the traditional clothes or
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 of their country.
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, in
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 way, tourists will not have a reason to travel to different destinations if all places are the same.
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 countries will lose money because of the decline of tourism.
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, the personality of its human will be lost. Every man or woman will be similar and they will cannot express their taste. Specifically, children will have the biggest problem of all humans because they will not make a personality, they will not have choices and they will choose what others propose. In conclusion, I strongly believe that the sale of the same or similar things in every corner of the planet will become disastrous for humans and especially for children. we should not forget our culture and the history behind
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. The only thing that we must do is to protect our culture from massification if we want our children to know where the start of our civilization was.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • globalization
  • diversity
  • homogenization
  • cultural assimilation
  • global connection
  • local businesses
  • economic impact
  • consumerism
  • standardization
  • westernization
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