Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, most
people
usually follow the trends of
products
.
Thus
,
finally
, we become similar to others and
this
is a phenomenon which happens all over the world. In my opinion,
this
development has a negative interaction towards the
people
.
To begin
with, almost every country sells the same things for every type of item.
For instance
,
products
for home, clothes and whatever you can search. Someone can tell that
this
is very useful because you needn't travel to far destinations to find something that you want.
In addition
, it is right for all
people
to have access to the same
products
and to find them easily because all humanity should have the same rights.
On the other hand
,
this
massification can affect the culture of each country. By buying the same clothes or, generally, the same items it is possible for
people
to forget the traditional clothes or
products
of their country.
Furthermore
, in
this
way, tourists will not have a reason to travel to different destinations if all places are the same.
Thus
countries will lose money because of the decline of tourism.
Moreover
, the personality of its human will be lost. Every man or woman will be similar and they will cannot express their taste. Specifically, children will have the biggest problem of all humans because they will not make a personality, they will not have choices and they will choose what others propose. In conclusion, I strongly believe that the sale of the same or similar things in every corner of the planet will become disastrous for humans and especially for children. we should not forget our culture and the history behind
this
. The only thing that we must do is to protect our culture from massification if we want our children to know where the start of our civilization was.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • globalization
  • diversity
  • homogenization
  • cultural assimilation
  • global connection
  • local businesses
  • economic impact
  • consumerism
  • standardization
  • westernization
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