The graph below shows the population change between 1940 and 2000 in three different counties in the U.S. state of Oregon.
The given line graph shows the growth in the proportion of populations in three counties,
Columbia
, Yamhill
, and Washington
in the state of Oregon from 1940 to 2000.
Overall
, it is apparent that Washington
had far higher citizen increases among the three counties. While
Columbia
and Yamhill
had progressively risen between the years of
1940 and 2000.
In 1940, Change preposition
apply
Columbia
had the lowest population compared to others. It was around 28,000 people. Yamhill
had a citizen of about 30,000 people, while
Washington
had highest
, which is more than double Correct article usage
the highest
of
Correct pronoun usage
that of
Yamhill
.
In 1970, Colombia and Yamhill
had a small increase of 5%. Washington
had a 50% growth of inhabitants.
Finally
, in 2000, Washington
had a massive increase in the number of residents by far from other counties, which is above double of
the past 30 years. Correct pronoun usage
that of
Columbia
, together with
Yamhill
had continuous raises by 20%, which is in the range of 75,000 to 90,000 people.Submitted by ssssisi on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words columbia, yamhill, washington with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increases" was used 3 times.
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