Some people think that the increasing use of computers and mobile phones for communication has had a negative effect on young people’s reading and writing skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
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has
been affected a negative impact on their reading and writing skills by using Change the verb form
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of
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technologies
for communication. From my perspective, it seems convincing since using mobile phones and computers can lead young adults to have a challenge in Use synonyms
comprehension
of words and sentences, and they cannot focus on what they are doing.
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To begin
with, I accept that using Linking Words
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technologies
can Fix the agreement mistake
technology
influence
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have
effects
on young adults. Use synonyms
Firstly
, youngsters can download tools to use for their reading and writing. Linking Words
This
is because cutting-edge Linking Words
technologies
summarise the paragraphs Use synonyms
such
as news and articles. Linking Words
Consequently
, young Linking Words
people
found it effective to read and to save their time. Use synonyms
For example
, Chat GPT, which is Artificial intelligence, can check and edit the writing Linking Words
people
make, so that Use synonyms
people
apply Use synonyms
this
technology Linking Words
on
their writing to save their time. Change preposition
to
Also
, smartphones Linking Words
makes
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allow
people
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access
the Internet anywhere and anytime. It can Fix the infinitive
to access
make
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allow
people
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easier
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information
they need. Add an article
the information
And
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Therefore
therefore
, utilising Linking Words
technologies
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have
positive Correct subject-verb agreement
has
effects
on youths.
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On the other hand
, I am convinced that Linking Words
use
of computers and smartphones Correct article usage
the use
have
more negative Correct subject-verb agreement
has
effects
on young adults. First of all, more usage of cutting-edge Use synonyms
technologies
makes Use synonyms
people
have less Use synonyms
comprehension
. Young Use synonyms
people
tend to read in Use synonyms
hurry
and inefficiently. Which can cause Correct article usage
a hurry
of
poor Change preposition
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comprehension
. Use synonyms
For example
, in Korea, Linking Words
Korean
Broadcasting System, called KBS, did Correct article usage
the Korean
comprehensive
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a comprehensive
for checking
how smartphones impact Change preposition
to check
people
’s Use synonyms
comprehension
. Use synonyms
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As
the
result, 9 out of 10 Correct article usage
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people
were not able to pass Use synonyms
this
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cannot
understand what Wrong verb form
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exactly Correct article usage
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mean
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people
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are
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from
the writing. Change preposition
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Moreover
, high Linking Words
technologies
can cause less concentration. Use synonyms
This
is because modern Linking Words
people
have a tendency Use synonyms
of switching
their Change preposition
to switch
screen
quickly, meaning that they cannot stay on the same page for a long time to focus. And Fix the agreement mistake
screens
therefore
, Linking Words
usage
of high Correct article usage
the usage
technologies
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effects
on young Use synonyms
people
.
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To conclude
, Linking Words
use
of high Correct article usage
the use
technologies
can lead young Use synonyms
people
to face difficulties in their writing and reading since it Use synonyms
cause
disturbing concentration and Change the verb form
causes
reduce
the ability Change the verb form
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Grammar
Make sure to use subject-verb agreement correctly throughout your essay. For example, 'youngsters has been affected' should be 'youngsters have been affected'.
Grammar
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Style
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Coherence
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Grammar
Proofread your essay to catch and correct typographical and grammatical errors such as 'smartphones makes people' which should be 'smartphones make people'.
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