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With a growing world population, one of the most pressing issues is that of feeding such a large number of people. Some people think that GM food offers a viable solution to this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays the modern
world
 is faced with a problem of hunger in some parts of the
world
 and feeding
such
 a large number of people. It has origins in a growing
world
 population during the
last
 centuries. other
people
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 opinion that GM foods are
possible
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a possible
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 way to solve
this
 problem
with
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of
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 widespread famine
due to
 overpopulation.
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,
the
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apply
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certain
of
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modifications in the structure have a positive effect
for
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on
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 increasing harvest
such
 as including unfreezing or high reproduction
genes
. Scientists can include some
genes
 with the necessary features in the structure of cash crops,
were
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that were
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 cut from
the
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wild plants. These modifications help farmers to enhance the harvest without problems caused
insects
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 or any other conditions. In spite of all the advantages some people are scared of eating GM foods,
in other words
, they are sure that modified
genes
 can build in the human genome and modify the structure of DNA. From the scientific point of view, in real
life
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 their fears don’t have any causes because of
inability
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the inability
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 to insert
genes
 from the plants in the human genome. At the same
time
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 scientists are working with the modification of animal organisms,
that
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 has more challenges, but
also
 good perspectives to solve the issue
with
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 food shortage. In conclusion,
it is clear that
 the benefits of GM foods outweigh the drawbacks, and promise to overcome
world
 famine.
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Introduction
Consider being more explicit about your stance in the introduction for clarity.
Body Paragraphs
Develop your paragraphs with clearer topic sentences to enhance reader understanding.
Examples
Provide more specific examples to support your points about the benefits and concerns of GM foods.
Grammar
Be cautious with grammar and spelling to ensure your points are clearly communicated.
Content
Try to explore both sides of the argument more thoroughly to fully address the essay question.
Content
You provided a structured argument discussing both benefits and concerns of GM foods.
Conclusion
Your conclusion effectively summarized your main ideas.

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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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