The chart gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1986 and in 2018.
The column chart illustrates that households how spent their revenue on a weekly basis in a certain country in the years 1968 and 2018.
Overall
, it can be seen that the largest amount of money was spent on food in 1968, whereas
the figure for providing fuel and power was the lowest. Furthermore
, the proportions of income which was devoted to household goods were equal in these two years.
First,
the percentage of weekly income which was spent on food in 1968 was the highest at 35%, while
the expenses of fuel and power were the lowest at nearly 6% in the same year. Additionally
, the amount of money which was allocated to household goods was equal in both years at approximately 8%. In 2018, the highest percentage of weekly income was spent on leisure activities with roughly 22%. Furthermore
, this
year, people cared about personal goods and also
fuel and power equally at 4%. Finally
, it is worth noting that the amount of money which was devoted to transport and leisure purposes in the year 1968 was approximately equal to 9%.Submitted by maryam.nutrition1988 on
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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