THE CHART BELOW SHOWS THE CHANGES THAT TOOK PLACE IN THREE DIFFERENT AREAS OF CRIME IN NEWPORT CITY CENTER FROM 2003 – 2012
The chart illustrates how crime categories
such
as burglary, car
theft and robbery were changed in three different areas of Newport city center
from 2003 to 2012.
In 2003 ,as we can see burglary was the main player in Change the spelling
centre
this
chart, with the
little less than 3500 reported cases. Correct article usage
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was not for a
long, because Correct article usage
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then
it increased to about 4000 units
in 2004.Then
it fell sharply and continued to fall by 2008.In 2008 it reached more than 1000 units
of burglary. Afterall
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After all
this
line stopped growing and falling a lot,
and finished its journey in 2012 in the amount of just under 1500 Remove the comma
apply
units
.
Second
type of crime is Change the article
The second
car
theft. It is one of the biggest crime type
in Change to a plural noun
types
this
chart. In 2003 number of cars that was
stolen at around 3000 Change the verb form
were
units
. This
statement don’t
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doesn’t
changed
until 2005.From 2005 to 2006 it Change the verb form
change
show
us a really big decreasing up to 2000 Change the verb form
shows
units
of car
thefts. This
figure didn’t change much until 2010,
when it reached a little more than 2500 Remove the comma
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car
thefts. It don’t
change much Change the verb form
doesn’t
further
.
As we can see, amount of robberies didn’t change much and the maximum that it reached was 1000 in 2004.
Finally
, robbery has always been the main problem for Newport.Submitted by madinabonu.bm on
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