The two graphs below show the average hours or daily sunshine and temperature throughout the year in two cities in Australia.
The two line graphs illustrate the average
hours
of sunshine
and temperature throughout the year in two various cities in Australia.
Overall
, the averages of temperatures increased in both Derwin
and Melbourne
. However
, in Derwin
, the average hours
of sunshine
went up, by contrast
, that of Melbourne
is unchanged.
In detail, the number of Derwin
average temperatures made up 18 which was three times higher than that of Melbourne
in January. The figures for Derwin
and Melbourne
average temperatures climbed dramatically before decreasing to 21 and 9 in December respectively.
Regarding the average hours
of sunshine
, the indicator of Melbourne
's average hours
of sunshine
ranked first,
accounting for 10, while
that of Derwin
stood at 6 at the beginning of the period. In the following 8 months, the quantity of Derwin
average hours
of sunshine
overtook the figure for Melbourne
, then
it remained stable, at 11. A decrease was observed in the number of Melbourne
average hours
, at 6, then
it was unchanged from June to September. The quantity of Melbourne
rose to 10, whereas
that of Derwin
declined to 8 at the end
of the period.Submitted by writingbhos on
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