Many people believe that companies and individuals should pay to clean up the environment in proportion to the amount of pollution they have produced. To what extent to you agree or disagree?
Some of the population think that factories and people who have produced emissions into the
environment
should pay their part for taking care of those dirty locations. I completely agree because those citizens will sense more responsibility and they will try to reduce their Use synonyms
waste
.
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To begin
with, the cleaning process of Linking Words
waste
needs cooperation by who made it, so companies have to pay for it, Use synonyms
this
action will inform them about some consequences Linking Words
which
that they have caused Correct pronoun usage
apply
also
they will face those effects. Linking Words
For instance
, steel companies in Iran used to Linking Words
waste
a significant amount of water for their cooling system and Use synonyms
this
made their surroundings polluted and unable to live areas, Linking Words
as a result
, the government forced them to pay for repairing that location and change their cooling system. Gradually these rules updated and some new limitations are being used for preserving the Linking Words
environment
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also
companies have to use the most up-to-date standards for controlling their Linking Words
waste
.
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Furthermore
, some individuals consume in a way that affects others' lives, Linking Words
such
as using a significant amount of fuel or water, Linking Words
hence
, their communities have to struggle with shortages and emissions. I think introducing some rules for that population will show their wasteful lifestyle, which has made other citizens' lives inconvenient and the community has to use less to make a balance. Linking Words
For example
, some farmers use old pumps for their fields and these engines produce a noticeable sound and Linking Words
also
produce large amounts of emissions and make all its surroundings polluted Linking Words
also
affecting the Linking Words
environment
. I think some obligations like payment will alter their behaviours and they will be more Use synonyms
concern
about cleaning nature and reducing fumes.
In conclusion, I believe the community which has polluted our surroundings should pay for cleaning because they will learn the importance of saving the Replace the word
concerned
environment
and gradually they will alter their habits and standards for preserving natural habitats.Use synonyms
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