The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed.

The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed.
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The table and pie chart
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data on the police allowance in 2017 and 2018 in a place of Britain. The table illustrates how the money
earned
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was earned
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and the pie chart shows where it was spent.
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,
it is clear that
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the budget was offered from three sources which consist of
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government, local taxes and others. It is
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worth mentioning that the police expended money on three main groups of expenses (salaries for officers and staff, technology and building and transport)
To begin
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with, 175, 5
million
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came from
national
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the national
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government in 2017 and
this
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number increased to 177, 8
million
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in 2018.
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, there was an approximately 11. 1
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change in local taxes from 91. 2
million
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to 102. 3
million
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and the total budget grew up to 13. 9
million
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. Looking at the pie chart, we can see that 75% of
budget
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the budget
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was spent on salaries in the first year and it decreased to 69% by 2018. Spending money on technology was 8% at first and there was
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%
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chance
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to 14%
at the end
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of the given period.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • budget allocation
  • funding sources
  • government policies
  • economic conditions
  • community services
  • crime prevention
  • public safety
  • significant increase/decrease
  • distribution
  • assessment
  • reflection
  • allocation shifts
  • budget comparison
  • impact analysis
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