Some people think that robots are important for human's future development. Others think that robots have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
As time changes from generation to generation, so the
technology
. Few people
state that robots
are crucial for the coming generations. On the other hand
, an array of masses suggests that robots
will have a bad impact on society. In the following paragraphs, I will describe both opinions and give my opinion.
To start with, according to
the first group of people
, robots
are good for our future generations because there will be good productivity and as it is an advanced technology
it will help people
in doing their business development. It will also
help in creating business ideas for the country's economy. Robot technology
is also
beneficial for humankind as they will learn different things from it. It will create good competition among countries. Artificial intelligence is important for women also
as it will help them in doing house chores and they will be able to find more time to do important things with their families. In these ways, advanced technology
will benefit people
.
On the other hand
, people
think that robots
will affect badly for coming generations. It is somewhat true that if artificial intelligence takes place all over the world people
will be unemployed. They will lose their jobs and they will just sit at home doing nothing. For women who work at home as a homemaker if they use this
technology
, they will become couch potatoes. Women will be unhealthy all the time because they are not performing any household chores and an unhealthy woman cannot give birth to a healthy child. There will be a lot of problems that will take place during pregnancy and it will be a serious problem. There is another example of using artificial technology
in driving. If a robot drives the vehicle more accidents will happen if something goes wrong with its technology
that can have a huge effect on its inventor. So, these are the disadvantages of the advanced technology
.
In conclusion, I would say that we can have this
technology
to some limit but doing things on our own is better.Submitted by jatinderpanaich328 on
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