the chart and graph below give information about participants who have entered the Olympics since it began.summarize the information by selecting and reporting on the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart depicts the engagement of males and females in international competition from the beginning.
Overall
, it is clearly apparent, that males were always in the lead throughout the period but significantly females also
had an increment in the rise in time.
In addition
, at the beginning of the Olympics in 1924 around 3000 Men had participated while
approximately 100 girls joined the Olympics besides
that after 28 years Men's participation was increased by roughly 1250 (4250) whilst Women also
had a notable increase of nearly 200 (300).
Additionally
, after almost three decades Women had somewhere uplift of 1000 involvement (1300) and gentlemen with upwards of 850 individuals. Afterwards, by
the passing of time, Females Change preposition
with
were having
a rapid soar till 2012 of around 3500 (4800) and Men just had a gradual increase of an estimated 700 Wrong verb form
had
overall
(5900).Submitted by tushalk329 on
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