The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph below indicates the number of tourists who visited a Caribbean
island
from 2010 to 2017 and their accommodation includes visitors who are staying on cruise ships and those who staying on the Use synonyms
island
and a total of both.
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To begin
with, the number of people who stayed on cruise ships in 2010 was under 0.5 Linking Words
million
by 2011 reached half a Use synonyms
million
but again fluctuating up to 2013 remained at half a Use synonyms
million
than from 2014 Use synonyms
this
amount started a dramatic growth eventually, and in 2017 reached 2 Linking Words
million
people.
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Secondly
, the people who stayed on the Linking Words
island
in 2010 and 2011 was at the same level of around 0.7 Use synonyms
million
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then
in 2012 significantly increased to over 1 Linking Words
million
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next,
in 2013 had a slight jump that reached 1.5 and Linking Words
for
the next two years remained at the same amount but in 2016 had a little decrease and Change preposition
apply
finally
in 2017 again reached 1.5 Linking Words
million
. In total, the number of both stayed on Use synonyms
island
and cruise ships in 2010 was 1 Use synonyms
million
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then
had a small increase that reached around 1.2 Linking Words
million
in 2012 again had a little growth reaching 1.5 Use synonyms
million
after 2012 every year had considerable growth half a Use synonyms
million
until 2014 than in 2015 and 2015 was at the same level of over 2.5 Use synonyms
million
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finally
in 2017 dramatically increased to 3.5 Linking Words
million
.Use synonyms
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