the diagram below show the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.

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The map illustrates what changes have been made in the Central

Library

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over the

last

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2 decades.

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although

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the main entrance is still in the same spot as it was before, the main corridor of the floor has become more specious

as well as

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an increase in adult facilities. It can be seen that in the past the children's

books

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section

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used to be on the northeast of the

library

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but it has been relocated to the opposite west side with a space where the storytelling event with two L-shaped sofas, is conducted today.

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, the electronic

section

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in the northwest of the

library

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has been gone to in front of the room and it has been changed to the computer

section

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, The lecture book part is the newest part of

this

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floor which has been replaced by the Children's

books

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section

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and it is faced with the cafe where it used to be the Enquiry desk which has been changed to its north between adult fiction

books

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and self-service machines.

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, the door is constructed for the cafe which is just right of the entrance door. By packing up the tables and chairs in the middle

section

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of the

library

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, there is more space in the main corridor and all reference

books

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are the newest

section

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which has been built over

this

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period.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words library, books, section with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

226 words

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