You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a speacial occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter ⁃Give details of your visit to the restaurant ⁃Expain the reason for the celebration ⁃Say what was good about the food and the service

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Dear Manager, I am writing

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letter to express my extreme satisfaction with the services I received at your restaurant during our recent visit. We visited your restaurant

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Friday and everything was up-to-mark.

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we had no pre-booking,still your staff coordinated 30 people on the spot very efficiently. It was actually a birthday party for my youngest niece and we were planning to celebrate at home. But later our plan changed and we reached your place. I told the staff that we want quite reasonable arrangements regarding food and decoration. To my surprise, they informed me that decoration for the birthday party was free of cost. I was over the moon to hear

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and everyone was very happy to see

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a beautiful decor. As per my requirement,we had some vegetarians, so vegetarian dishes were

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commendable.

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, the food was delicious and aromatic.Especially, the buffet had a variety of desserts and International cuisines. The Staff was highly cooperative and responsible. They made our day memorable. Soon, we are planning another event and your restaurant will be my top priority. Once again thank you for your great services and the food! Yours truly, AR

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coherence and cohesion

While the letter is mostly clear, ensure all punctuation is correctly placed, as in 'no pre-booking; still, your staff coordinated...'

task achievement

Elaborate slightly more on one of the food items or services to enhance the completeness of your response.

task achievement

The letter effectively conveys appreciation and includes specific details about the visit, which is excellent for task achievement.

coherence and cohesion

Good usage of polite language and expressions of gratitude, contributing positively to the tone of the letter.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

196 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

celebration
atmosphere
ambiance
appetizers
main course
desserts
standout
flavors
presentation
attentiveness
friendliness
efficiency
memorable
gratitude
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