The diagram below shows the process of milk production. Write a report of at least 150 words describing the main details.
The given diagram provides an outline of the method to produce
milk
.
Overall
, the stage begins with cows
grazing and ends with delivering milk
products
to supermarkets and shops in the supply chain.
To begin
with, cows
roam freely and graze to maintain their health. Consequently
, healthy cows
can produce more milk
. Subsequently
, the cows
are milked twice a day using milking machines, and the raw milk
is stored in refrigerated storage. Once ready, a milk
tanker collects the milk
and delivers it to the factory daily. At the factory, machinery processes the milk
into dairy products
such
as milk
, cheese, cream, and butter, meeting the demands of the supply chain.
An additional point to note is that after the milk
products
are produced, they undergo a procedure to be pasteurized and packaged.
Finally
, they are served in supermarkets and shops for sale to consumers, ensuring the availability of fresh dairy products
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Vocabulary: Replace the words milk, cows, products with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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