The chart below shows the changes in three different areas of crime in Manchester city centre from 2003-2012.

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the line graph

shows

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the variation in

three

different types of crime in Manchester city Centre over the 9 years to 2012. With regard to trends in the illegal case, we can analyze the diagram in two ways.

First,

Car Theft and Robbery rose nearly

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from around two

thousand

and

three

hundred

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under

three

thousand

, and a small proportion above five hundred to about the same number, in order.

While

the Burglary climbed from just below

three

thousand

and five hundred slightly to nearly

three

thousand

and seven hundred

then

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dramatically down to just a little above a

thousand

after that, gradually increasing to nearly one

thousand

and five hundred

in

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.

Second,

we can categorize stealing

car

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together with

stealing from the place for both high on the chart, the start and the end more over than one

thousand

and left the stealing from person which the begin and finish in the lower amount. In conclusion, in 2012, a number of cars lost by theft

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a major kind of criminal

behavior

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. So, we need to be concerned about

this

and take action against it. Thieves from

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were the neat problem, and purloin from people was the lowest which had no sign of going higher.