The map shows the development of the village of Rye mouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The maps compare the design of Rye Mouth village in 1995 and now.
Overall
, It is clear that
the number of accommodations has increase
Change the verb form
increased
through out
the period. Meanwhile, some recreational facilities have been built in the village.
Abundant things have been eliminated from the Correct your spelling
throughout
erea
. Correct your spelling
area
Firstly
, the fish markets alongside the street and near the sea have been replaced by some apartments. Secondly
, unlike in 1995, there is no fishing port anymore. Finally
, the forest park in
the right side of the road, just in front of the hotel has been destroyed as well.
A lot of things have been constructed since 1995. The number of houses in the north-western part of the village has increased. Change preposition
on
Additionally
, a new road has been built along a
old one in the north-western part of the area and between some residences. Meantime, a parking lot has been constructed for the hotel Change the article
an
as well as
a new tennis ground in the golf area which is
created by changing the farmlands.Wrong verb form
was
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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