The pie chart below shows the average household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010.

The pie chart below shows the average household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010.
The given pie charts reveal statistics about the percentage of household expenses on five different
goods
and
services
between two nations, namely Japan and Malaysia in 2010.
Overall
, both countries allocated the largest proportion of their expenditure towards housing and other
goods
and
services
,
while
healthcare
services
represented the least common spending. Housing expenditure in Malaysia accounted for the largest percentage, at 34%, more than the figures for the food category and other
goods
and
services
, with respective figures being 27% and 26% in 2010. During the same year, transport and healthcare constituted far less of the total household expenses, at 10% and 3%, respectively. For Japanese families, approximately one-third of their
overall
budget was spent on other
services
and
goods
, followed by 24% allocated to food. Housing and transport spending
were
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roughly the same, with 21% and 20% in that order, compared to only 6% in the figure for health care expenses.
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