the maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbition, and planned future development of the site.

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The two maps depict the current Norbition industrial area and the plans for future development projects.

Firstly

it is clear that

those places will be turned into industrial areas for residents. All the factories will be demolished and seven housings will be built in the city.

In addition

, a bridge which allows people to cross over the river will be constructed at the north of the site.

Also

, there will be built housing on the land which used to be used for farmland. Farmland will be moved right side of the housing.

However

, there is an interesting change compared with the current Norbition area in the eventual development plan. Two useful infrastructures,which are,shops and a medical centre,will be located in the middle of the municipality for residents in the planned.

Furthermore

, at the east of the township, some places will be built,which are, a school and a playground for children at the east of the metropolis.

To sum up

, Norbition Township will experience numerous changes in the future, and it is evident that all the new facilities will be constructed for new residents.

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the maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbition, and planned future development of the site.

Nowadays more people are choosing to live with their friends or alone rather than with their families, this trend is likely to have a negative impact on community. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

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