The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The chart shows the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The chart shows the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two pie charts compare Ashdown Museum visitors' level of satisfaction that was collected pre and post-refurbishment of the museum. Sightseers were asked to choose a rating between very satisfied, satisfied, dissatisfied, and very dissatisfied.
However
, they were not obligated to provide a response.
Overall
, the information clearly shows the guest impression of the venue has been improved, thanks to the renovation effort. Portion of dissatisfied people was dramatically decreased from 40 to 15.
In contrast
, both satisfied and very satisfied ratings were significantly spiked, with recorded figures of 40 and 35 respectively. Going into details, it is apparent that before the facility was refurbished, half of the attendees were dissatisfied, with 10 of them being very dissatisfied.
Furthermore
, there was no high satisfaction among museumgoers, indicated by only 15
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that they were very satisfied.
Finally
, data post-refurbishment revealed a good impression from the exhibition viewers, leaving a total dissatisfaction just at 20.
Also
interesting to note that the number of guests who did not submit their responses remains the same at 5.
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