Some people think that the most important thing about being rich is it gives a person the opportunity to help other people. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Most
people
believe that the most essential thing about being rich is it gives the opportunity to help other people
. Being rich has both sides positive and negative people
want to know about both sides, so I will discuss this
in detail.
Every human has the humanity to help other people
but in spite of their financial situation, they cannot able to help others. Rich people
have the ability and power to help mankind by giving their money to the poor through charity, they can even start a new trust for the persons who are all in need of shelter, food, medical emergencies etc…. Business owners can reduce the price of their products even if needy people
can afford them, they can also
provide many discounts to buy the product. For example
, Ratan Tata is the man who gives 90% of his money to charity and helps many ways for people
in their life
.
Fix the agreement mistake
lives
On the other hand
, many business owners are prevented from helping others but instead
, they cheat the government by making corruption through fake advertisements, fake trust, and fake products. They can smoothly be escaped from the government through taxes by fake help to the people
. For instance
, Vijay Mallaya
gets a loan from the bank for his business and without helping others he escapes to another nation.
Correct your spelling
Mallya
To sum up
, I strongly agree with the rich people
who spend their money on the poor people
by using their power and kindness. Being rich has its own pros and cons, people
should be aware of it and act according to
their well-being.Submitted by insighttribez on
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Task Response
Try to maintain a clear and direct answer to the question from the beginning, ensuring that your stance (agree or disagree) is unequivocally stated in the introduction.
Coherence and Cohesion
For a more cohesive essay, use a variety of linking phrases and topic sentences to connect your ideas more coherently.
Task Response
In discussing both views, ensure that a balanced comparison is made, particularly if the essay question directly asks you to 'discuss' or 'agree/disagree'. Your personal opinion should be clear throughout the essay.
Coherence and Cohesion
Develop your paragraphs with more detailed examples and explanations to fully support your main points. This not only enriches your essay but also strengthens your argument.
Task Response
Good use of examples to support your points, such as Ratan Tata and Vijay Mallya, which makes your essay more persuasive.
Task Response
Your conclusion effectively summarizes your viewpoint, providing a clear stance on the topic.