The table below gives information on consumer spending

The table below gives information on consumer spending
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The table below gives information on consumer spending
The table illustrates the proportion of consumer expenditure on a variety of products in five countries in the year 2002.
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it is clear that
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people tend to spend cash on food, drinks and tobacco
however
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they are not keen on using it in leisure and education.
To begin
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with, food, beverages and tobacco were consumed by
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in 2002 which occupied 32.14% followed by Ireland with 28.91%. Spaniards spent their money on these items around 18.80% and both Italy and Sweden had a fraction less than
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by half.
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, consumers in Italy use their cash on clothing and footwear at 9%.
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, Spain and Ireland almost had the same percentage which was about nearly 6.5%. Sweden came in the
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place with exactly 5.40%.
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, as same as in products for consumption,
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came in
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first place in leisure and education expenditure with 4.35% in 2002. There was an unnoticeable gap in
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item between Sweden and Italy, by 0.02%.
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, Ireland and Spain registered 2.21% and 1.98% respectively.

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Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words turkey with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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