The map below shows the changes that have taken palce at the waterfront area of a town calles Darwin between 2009 and 2014.

The two maps illustrate how a section of a town, whose name was Darwin, altered over a five-year period from 2009 to 2014.

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, the waterfront of Darwin was mainly an industrial and recreational area in 2009,

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part of the town experienced a notable alternation in the next five

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and turned into a residential and recreational space for its residents. The main significant development was planting more trees, with an extra footpath, and

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of a university building in 2014, on the area that was allocated to industrial purposes five years ago.

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, the number of residential buildings doubled during the same timeframe. It is

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obvious from the map that the school and convention

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never relocated, and they stayed in the top left-hand corner of

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. On the recreational side,

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there were two swimming pools by the sea in the year 2009, a new one was constructed

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of the industrial space next to the Lake.

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fishing facilities remained in the same location, a harbour was erected over the sea in the

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right-hand corner of the map.