The map below shows the changes that have taken palce at the waterfront area of a town calles Darwin between 2009 and 2014.

The map below shows the changes that have taken palce at the waterfront area of a town calles Darwin between 2009 and 2014.
The two maps illustrate how a section of a town, whose name was Darwin, altered over a five-year period from 2009 to 2014.
Overall
,
however
, the waterfront of Darwin was mainly an industrial and recreational area in 2009,
this
part of the town experienced a notable alternation in the next five
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and turned into a residential and recreational space for its residents. The main significant development was planting more trees, with an extra footpath, and
erection
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of a university building in 2014, on the area that was allocated to industrial purposes five years ago.
In addition
, the number of residential buildings doubled during the same timeframe. It is
also
obvious from the map that the school and convention
center
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never relocated, and they stayed in the top left-hand corner of
waterfront
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. On the recreational side,
although
there were two swimming pools by the sea in the year 2009, a new one was constructed
instead
of the industrial space next to the Lake.
Furthermore
,
while
fishing facilities remained in the same location, a harbour was erected over the sea in the
bottum
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bottom
right-hand corner of the map.
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