ome people think that the study of history is of little use . Others believe that studying history helps us to know the present. Discuss both viewpoints and give your own opinion.
History is but an account of the progress of human civilisation ,
however
, since the study of it has no tangible benefits like the sciences, many consider it useless. Contrary to this
, others view that dude should learn from his past to better the present and mould the future. This
essay delves into both these contrasting ideas, ere a conclusion is evolved. First of all, the former opinion is based on the fact that the study of the past is unproductive. For instance, the past is only an account of man's past wars and conquests. Studying learning, on the other hand, is helpful to fellows in many ways. Moreover
, extensive research and newer innovations are essential for human beings to be able to face the enormous demands of the ever-increasing masses. Only discipline can save the world in future from total destruction. In contrast
, the latter view is founded on deeper thinking. It argues that humans should know the paths they have trodden (= travelled) in the past to become aware of the dangers involved, with a view to avoiding them in the present. This
is, indeed, a wise outlook. A deep look into the past will show how gentleman has progressed over the years, about great empires and civilisations, great wars and, above all
, bloody revolutions which have changed human thinking altogether. In that sense, the past plays a greater role than information. On close scrutiny, the study of the past is usually considered unimportant. True, it does not have apparent and tangible benefits like, say, skill, which has contributed unlimited benefits to humans. However
, as a guide for the present and for the days to come, the past has great significance.Submitted by praveenmodi28596 on
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Lexical Resource
Use more varied and precise vocabulary to express ideas more effectively.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
Try to use a wider range of grammatical structures to showcase language proficiency while maintaining accuracy.
Coherence and Cohesion
Implement clearer topic sentences at the beginning of paragraphs to enhance clarity and coherence.
Task Response
The essay realistically addresses both viewpoints and provides a personal opinion, ensuring a balanced discussion.
Coherence and Cohesion
Introduction and conclusion are well-formulated, setting up and summarizing the argument effectively.
Task Achievement
Good use of examples to support main points, enhancing task achievement.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
