There is a sports stadium near your home where large number of people come to watch games each weekend. This cause you and your neighbours some problems. Write aletter to the local council . In your letter- -explain who you are and where you live -describe the problem -suggest what the local council should do

Dear Sir/Madam I am Preet, I am living right side of the park at Queens Street. I am writing
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letter to express my concern about the problems that arise from the large gathering at the stadium, which affects those of us who live nearby, not only during the day but
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at night. Moving
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, every Saturday and Sunday, a large number of people visit
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stadium for different purposes, some are for exercising, and others are for playing matches. During a match lot of individuals are shouting, whistling, or even fighting. We all try to cooperate with
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, but the same issue at night is intolerable; it disturbs our sleep,
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which we cannot work properly in daytime. We can understand that
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is a stadium and everyone is coming to play here, but I kindly request that with the help of a few steps,
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problem can be tackled.
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arranging a noise-cancelling system is helpful, and
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the time limitations for entering the ground can be beneficial for both of us. We can sleep well at night, and they can play in the mornings. Thank you for your attention to
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matter. I hope appropriate action will be taken soon for the betterment of our community. Yours faithfully, Manpreet Kaur

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coherence and cohesion
Add a brief introduction to explain the purpose of your letter at the start.
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Make sure to clarify some points with more detail or examples.
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Use clearer transitions between ideas to make it flow better.
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Clear description of the problem and suggested solutions.
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Good closing note that shows concern for the community.
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