the pie charts and table give information about the total value and sources of fish imported to the us between 1988 and 2000. Summarize the imformations and comparing
The diagram and table below show the nominal and the origin
countries
of fish
shipped to the US in 1988, 1992, and 2000.
In general, the value of fish
imported to the US has increased for 12 years. Firstly
, most of the fish
shipped in 1998 was from Canada
but the pattern has changed over time that in 2000 fish
imported from various countries
.
Looking into detail, the increase in the import value was not significant over the period given, from 6.67 billion dollars in 1988 to 10.72 billion dollars in 2000, rising about 4 billion dollar
in 12 years. Apparently, the demand Change to a plural noun
dollars
of
Change preposition
for
fish
was not quite high. This
made less shipment from other countries
. In addition
, there were various countries
that became exporter
to Fix the agreement mistake
exporters
US
. Two of the Correct article usage
the US
bigest
ones were Change the word
biggest
Canada
and China. In 1988, two-third
of the Correct your spelling
two-thirds
fish
imported to the US came from Canada
, only 13% from China. Meanwhile
in 1992, the proportion of Add a comma
Meanwhile,
fish
shipped from China rose 7% but on the contrary
, Canada
experienced a great fall, that was a decrease of 26%. This
also
occurred in 2000 when other countries
took over Canada
to become the highest shippers.Submitted by srsdy008 on
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