The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart represents numbers of the annual
income
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of households in the years of 2007 , 2011 and 2015 .
Overall
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, it can be said that 100,000 or more it was the highest number of the
income
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. Unlike 2011, 25.000 - 49.999 was the largest. But in 2015 100.000 again became the highest number. It is interesting to notice that the number of families whose annual
income
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was 50.000-74.999 remained stable over the period
about
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23
million
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.
As well as
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less than 25.000 reached 25
million
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in 2007 and
then
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it
was
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slightly grew in 2011 approximately 37 minutes. In 2015, the 100.000 or more the highest
income
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around 36
million
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.
However
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, 25.000-49.999 approximately reached 27
million
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.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words income, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "numbers of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • household distribution
  • income brackets
  • annual income
  • percentage change
  • trend analysis
  • income group
  • significant increase/decrease
  • steady growth/decline
  • fluctuations
  • compared to
  • in contrast
  • notably
  • median income
  • poverty line
  • economic factors
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