You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000.
The chart depicts the various methods of
transportation
like Bus
, Car
, Bike
and Foot
to have a journey from the workplace in a European town between 1960, 1980 to 2000.
Overall
, it is clear that
, throughout the period Bike
and Foot
had a significant drop and Car
transportation
went continuously upwardside and Bus
fluctuated throughout the time.
To begin
with, in 1960 all methods of travelling had a gradual increase rather than Car
. Bus
, Bike
, Foot
and Car
with 20%, an around 27%, more or less than 35% and Car
with less usage proportion in 1960 of around 7%. Furthermore
, in 1980, Bus
went further
upwards by around 7% (27%), and Car
transportation
had significant changes of approximately 18% (25%) therefore
, going to the workplace by Walking (Foot
) has steadily decreased by somewhere 18% and stood with 17%. Moreover
, Bike
's userbase went a slight downward of somewhere 5% (22%).
In addition
, by the late 2000s public transportation
like Bus
had a downwards in usage portion with a roughly 10% ( 17%) and private Fix the agreement mistake
buses
transportation
Car
went upwards in terms of usage of around 10% (37%). Fix the agreement mistake
Cars
Likewise
, Bike
had a sudden drop of 15% and stood at 7%. Fix the agreement mistake
Bikes
Lastly
, By the time walking by Foot
had a gradual dive and in 2000 it stood at approximately 9%.Submitted by tushalk329
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Vocabulary: Replace the words transportation, bus, car, bike, foot with synonyms.
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