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The Table shows how many international students study in Canada and the United States by country of origin. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

The Table shows how many international students study in Canada and the United States by country of origin. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
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The given table presents data on the
number
 of international students
go
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who go
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 to
Canada
 and the
USA
 for studies from different countries (
China
, The
USA
,
India
,
Canada
).
Overall
,
China
 is the biggest exporter of children to
Canada
 and The
USA
 for the purpose of education.
While
,
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apply
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least
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the least
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number
 of Indian students prefer
Canada
 for their
further
 studies.
Further
, it is observable
, The
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that the
USA
 is not a very popular destination to study in
Canadian
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the Canadian
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 market.
To begin
 with,
mostly
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most
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 people from
China
,
USA
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the USA
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 and
India
 come to
Canada
 for schooling. 45
percent
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per cent
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 increase in the
number
 of students travelling from
china
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China
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 was seen during 2003. Followed by
35
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a 35
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 per cent increase in
the
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apply
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Indian travellers.
However
, Only
9
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a 9
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percent
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per cent
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 jump in the
number
 of
student
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students
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 from the
USA
 was observed. Very little change in the
number
 of travellers, travelling from
China
,
India
 and
Canada
 to The United
states
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States
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 for study was seen. Around 200,000 people travel to The
USA
 from
India
while
 only half of
it
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them
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comes
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come
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 from
China
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "further, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, canada, usa, china, india with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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