You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task: The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. You should write at least 150 words.
The graph illustrates
that
production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. There are three Correct determiner usage
the
caegories
of fuel: Petroleum, Coal, and Natural Correct your spelling
categories
gas
. Also
, it shows energy units
which from one million tonnes of oil per one
Correct pronoun usage
apply
engergy
unit.
First of all, in Correct your spelling
energy
term
of Petroleum, it started at under 100 Fix the agreement mistake
terms
engergy
Correct your spelling
energy
unit
and increased gradually until 1985, which at 140 energy Fix the agreement mistake
units
units
. However
, it decreased slightly until the year of
1990, Change preposition
apply
which
recorded 100 Correct word choice
when
engergy
Correct your spelling
energy
unit
, followed by Fix the agreement mistake
units
arise
again Correct your spelling
a rise
since
1991.
Change preposition
in
On the other hand
, Coal started from 80 units
in 1981. However
, it rapidly decreased in 1985, at 40 untits
, followed by 60 Correct your spelling
units
units
in 1986. Then
, it gradually decreased until 2000, even if it showed Correct article usage
a slightly
slightly increased
in 1995.
Replace the word
slight increase
For
Natural Change preposition
apply
gas
, it started at under 40 units
, which is lowest
level among Change the article
the lowest
three
Correct article usage
the three
fuel
. Fix the agreement mistake
fuels
However
, while
it did not change number
of Change the article
a number
the number
englergy
Correct your spelling
energy
units
, it gradually increased from 1991. Eventually, it scored almost 100 units
in 2000.
Overall
, the graph suggest
production of Change the verb form
suggests
pertoleum
is Correct your spelling
petroleum
the
highest Change preposition
at the
levels
, followed by Fix the agreement mistake
level
batrual
Correct your spelling
natural
gas
, and the lowest is coal. In 1991, natural gas
strated
increasing number significantly. It might suggest people realized that the importance of Correct your spelling
started
environment
protection since 1991, Replace the word
environmental
Thus
, they seemed
to Wrong verb form
seem
product
Replace the word
produce
natral
Correct your spelling
natural
gas
more than coal.Submitted by imagelim329 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words gas, units with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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