The diagram below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summarise the information by selection and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagrams illustrate the changes in the habitats of
salmon
, which is a species of big fish, and the range of its body size in each stage.
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Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
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salmon
have three main environments to live in, these places can vary Use synonyms
according to
salmons' growing stages, which can be divided into fry, smolt, and adult.
Looking at the first diagram, Linking Words
salmon
grow in the lower Use synonyms
river
where water is fast flowing, Use synonyms
this
period generally lasts for 4 years. Linking Words
Next,
they go to the open sea and live for approximately 5 years. Linking Words
Finally
, they come to the upper Linking Words
river
, but the Use synonyms
river
here is full of reeds and small stones and Use synonyms
thus
water is moving more slowly. Salmons stay at the upper Linking Words
river
for around 5-6 months and lay their eggs at the bottom of the Use synonyms
river
.
Concerning life stages, there are three stages in the Use synonyms
salmon
’s life cycle with different sizes. The first is the youngest stage 'fry' and these fish usually have a 3-8cm body length. Use synonyms
Then
, after leaving the lower Linking Words
river
, they become 'smolt', which have a body length of 12-15cm. Use synonyms
Salmon
become adults when they leave the open sea, and in Use synonyms
this
stage, they have fully grown and are 70-76cm long.Linking Words
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