The diagram below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summarise the information by selection and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summarise the information by selection and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagrams illustrate the changes in the habitats of
salmon
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, which is a species of big fish, and the range of its body size in each stage.
Overall
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it is clear that
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salmon
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have three main environments to live in, these places can vary
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salmons' growing stages, which can be divided into fry, smolt, and adult. Looking at the first diagram,
salmon
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grow in the lower
river
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where water is fast flowing,
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period generally lasts for 4 years.
Next,
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they go to the open sea and live for approximately 5 years.
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, they come to the upper
river
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, but the
river
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here is full of reeds and small stones and
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water is moving more slowly. Salmons stay at the upper
river
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for around 5-6 months and lay their eggs at the bottom of the
river
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. Concerning life stages, there are three stages in the
salmon
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’s life cycle with different sizes. The first is the youngest stage 'fry' and these fish usually have a 3-8cm body length.
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, after leaving the lower
river
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, they become 'smolt', which have a body length of 12-15cm.
Salmon
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become adults when they leave the open sea, and in
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stage, they have fully grown and are 70-76cm long.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words salmon, river with synonyms.
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