The diagram below shows the recycling process of aluminium cans. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the recycling process of aluminium cans. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The above depiction illustrates how aluminium cans are recycled.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the process comprises 6 steps which can be grouped into 3 major stages including the preparation and compressing of
used
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the used
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package, heating and melting, and completion of the end products for reusing. The process commences with the collection of cans from the special bucks for recycling
then
these used bottles go through cleaning and sorting. To be continued, the next phase is held in the specialized machine for heating, where cans are melted. In the
last
stage
melts
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aluminium will be rolled 2,5 mm- 6 mm thick. It finishes with
recycling
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the recycling
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of the goods.
For instance
, in the United Kingdom, 74% of drinking items were pre-made for use.
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