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Scientists predict that all people will choose to speak the same global language in the future. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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In the future, a group of scientists think that global communities will choose a similar
language
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 for communication. In my opinion,
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 development has two different dimensions that are
in contrast
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 with each other owing to the
fact
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 that it is a positive trend for companies and education systems to develop
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 the culture will be at risk. On the one hand, when international inhabitants have the same
language
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, they can connect with each other.
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, the interaction among societies creates accessibility for people across the
world
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 to the best education system in other countries and academic researchers all over the
world
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 can aid themselves in upgrading the level of science.
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, local businesses can connect with other firms all over the
world
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 and make international businesses that follow their work easier than the prior time
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 the
fact
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 that the same
language
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 creates a chance for them to work with each other.
On the other hand
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, the
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that is
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 really important is that one aspect of the diverse cultures across the
world
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 is their
language
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;
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, if global citizens speak the same
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,
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 several languages, which have fewer speakers and are the cultural identity , will extinction; in
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, after a short run, a number of traditional norms will be destroyed. In conclusion, in my view, homogenization in the
language
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 all over the work has a positive effect on students, knowledge, and international companies;
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, we have to know that it impacts cultural diversity.
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task achievement
Provide stronger and more specific examples to support your arguments, particularly in areas discussing cultural impact and language extinction.
coherence cohesion
When discussing complex ideas, ensure that your sentences are not too complex or overly lengthy, as it may hinder comprehension.
coherence cohesion
The introduction and conclusion effectively frame the essay and present a clear stance on the topic.
task achievement
You have successfully explained both the benefits and drawbacks of a global language, addressing the prompt comprehensively.

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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • global language
  • linguistic diversity
  • cultural heritage
  • language extinction
  • international communication
  • educational barriers
  • global homogenization
  • cultural identity
  • translation tools
  • linguistic resources
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