In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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In coming years all

vehicals

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vehicles

Car

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cars

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Bus

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buses

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and trucks will be able to be driven in autopilot mode. The

vehical

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vehicle

will be left with

passanger

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passenger

seats and Drivers might lose their jobs.

This

essay will examine

benefits

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the benefits

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and drawbacks of

driverless

vehicals

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vehicles

and provide a logical conclusion.

To begin

with,

Driverless

Cars

are only possible with Electric

vehicals

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vehicles

vehicle

which

provides

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provide

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no fossil fuel and it

prevent

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prevents

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pollution

therefore

, in

this

era, because of inflation it is really magnificent for Pipil to afford electric

Cars

but in recent

time

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times

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Elon

musk

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the owner of 'TESLA' organisation who manufacture electric

vehical

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vehicle

has

lauched

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launched

the Electric

Cars

, Buses and Trucks with the concern and

assisst

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assist

of our state.

Moreover

, the main concern of Pipil was about

pricesing

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pricing

processing

so Elon

musk

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launched

Vehicals

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vehicles

with affordable prices in which he offered

Driverless

journey

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which sounds gratifying, Many Pipil switched their

vehica

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vehicle

vehicles

with

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electric

becasuse

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because

of having

reasable

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reasonable

price

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prices

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and

also

Electric powered

vehical

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vehicle

vehicles

do save

your

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apply

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driver cost.

However

their

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there

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are

also

some drawbacks of

Driverless

vehical

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vehicle

vehicles

, in

todays

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today's

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era not in single

individuals

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individual

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wants to risk their life by relying on Autopilot mode. Even though, in recent times many accident cases related to

Driverless

vehicle

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vehicles

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came

infront

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in front

public

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the public

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that in a narrow road

besides

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beside

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the

mountain

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mountains

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Electric

Cars

sensors were not working and

becuase

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because

of that a parents lose their

childs

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children

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on the spot.

In addition

, there

was

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still

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a chances

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chances

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that many more cases related to these will

came

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forward in future which might be more horrifying as

compare

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compared

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to these accidents if

civilans

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civilians

do not stop using

Driverless

Vehicals

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vehicles

Lastly

becuase

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because

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these new technologies Drivers have

lossed

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lost

their jobs. In conclusion, There

was

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were

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more disadvantages as per our survey and people should stop using Autopilot

vehical

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vehicle

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Overall Band Score

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Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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296 words

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