An English speaking friend wants to spend a two-weeks holiday in your region and has written asking for information and advice Write a letter to your friend. In your letter offer to find somewhere to stay give advice about what to do give information about what clothes to bring
Hi Jack,
How are you doing bro? I hope you and your family are in good health. I'm quite happy to hear that you are coming to spend your vacation here in Cairo, it will be a great occasion to meet you.
I'd like to recommend booking a reservation in the Royal Hotel,
this
is a convenient accommodation besides
, it's quite cheap in comparison to other hotels in the same region, moreover
there are many wonderful places to visit around the hotel, Add a comma
moreover,
therefore
you will not spent
much time travelling.
If you are interested in discovering new locations, I would like you to come with me Change the verb form
spend
in
a journey to the Cairo desert, there you can see the beauty of nature, and Change preposition
on
in
addition
you will explore Add a comma
addition,
ancient
secrets of our civilization.
By the way, please bring your light clothes Correct article usage
the ancient
such
as soft shirts and jeans. Although
,
it's cold now in Canada, the weather is too hot Remove the comma
apply
in
Change preposition
at
this
time of year in Egypt.
I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
With love,
RamySubmitted by abdoo.magicoo on
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Grammar
Be cautious with time expressions - 'will not spent much time' should be 'will not spend much time'. Such small errors can be improved for clarity.
Style
Consider varying sentence structures and vocabulary to add more interest and sophistication to your writing.
Content
For an even stronger letter, you could give more specific advice or recommendations about places to visit or activities to enjoy near the hotel.
Structure
To enhance coherence, transitions between ideas can be smoothed out with linking phrases that clearly show the relationship between paragraphs.
Tone
The friendly and informal tone is suitable for a letter to a friend, maintaining a warm and inviting atmosphere.
Structure
You've structured your letter well, with a clear introduction, body paragraphs dedicated to each main point, and a warm conclusion.
Content
Good job on giving specific advice about what to do and what clothes to bring, tailoring your recommendations to the season and location.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,