The chart below gives information about how families in one country spend their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar chart illustrates the comparison of people's living
costs
in different parts. The graph shows the expense of living in eight items, including food
, housing and leisure. Generally, the expense of food
, fuel and power, clothing and footwear as well as
personal goods
were decreased. On the other hand
, the cost of housing, transport and leisure increased except for household goods
which remained stable.
In terms of food
that is
not as important as leisure in 2018, however
, in 1968, it was the reverse which in order was 30 per cent
and just over 15 per cent
of costs
that food
was the most important part of costs
for people in 1968. As regards housing, that is
equal in costs
with clothing and footwear in 1968 which were a tenth of the expenses, whilst in 2018 housing was in second place and clothing and footwear were in fifth place.
In addition
, under five per cent
of costs
belonged to fuel and power in 2018 which was the same as personal goods
, however
in 1968 the fuel and power were not quite as important as private merchandise. Moreover
, household commodities were not nowhere
near as necessary as transport in 2018, in fact, transport Rewrite the sentence
were not anywhere
were nowhere
costs
in 2018 were twice as vital as household goods
, but in 1968 they were the same just under 10 per cent
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