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Band 6.5

The given graph shows the nitrogen oxide emissions produced by four vehicles. Summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The given graph shows the nitrogen oxide emissions produced by four vehicles. Summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph gives information about four
fuel shaped
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 vehicles
produced
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that produced
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the
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apply
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nitrogen
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 oxide emissions.
Overall
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, the petrol
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car
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cars
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 and the diesel
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car
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cars
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 approximately remained stable,
while
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for
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the buses were the leading
vehicle
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vehicles
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 to emit
nitrogen
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 oxides at all speeds. Moving to a detailed analysis, with regards to buses produced, it began at around 40
g
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/
km
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 and
then
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 it decreased significantly and experienced the lowest figure at a speed of 60
kph
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 to 25
g
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/
km
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. The
nitrogen
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 oxide emissions produced by buses dramatically increased by 17
g
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/
km
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reached
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 42
g
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/
km
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among
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at
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speed
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speeds
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 of 60
kph
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 and 130
kph
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, which is the biggest indicator.
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, in terms of the
nitrogen
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 oxide emissions produced by lorries falling significantly
form
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from
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 33
g
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/
km
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 to 17
g
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/
km
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 during between the speed of 10
kph
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 and 90
kph
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.
This
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 proportion increased a little and
finally
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remainder
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the remainder
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 at 24, approximately. Is made up of the gas produced
of
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by
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 diesel
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car
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cars
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 and petrol
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car
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cars
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 fluctuated slightly and stood at
to
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5
g
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/
km
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 and 11
g
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/
km
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in
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at
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 the end of the speed, respectively.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 78%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words nitrogen, car, g, km, kph with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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