The pie charts below give data on the spending and consumption of resources by countries and how the population is distributed.

The pie charts below give data on the spending and consumption of resources by countries and how the population is distributed.
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The pie charts illustrate the allocation of resources by countries and the distribution of
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. The data depicts how different countries spend resources, the distribution of the
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population
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, and the consumption of resources by various regions. The charts reveal that Asia makes up the majority of the
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at 57%,
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Europe and the USA account for 60% of resource consumption. Europe and America each represent 14% of the
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, with Africa and other regions comprising 10% and 5% respectively. The USA and Europe together constitute the largest share (60%) of resource consumption, surpassing the combined share of other regions at 40%. In terms of spending, food, housing, and transport collectively represent just over half of global expenditure. The clothing sector contributes nearly a quarter of total spending, with the rest attributed to other categories. Notably, other sectors account for a significant portion of
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spending.
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