The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000. Summarize the information be selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000. 

Summarize the information be selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the data regarding
transport
system usage in
England
during two years, 1985 and 2000.
According to
the table, it can be observed, that the most popular
transport
type in both periods was travelling by car, with an average distance of travel per person in 1985 - 3 199 miles, and 4 806 miles in 2000.
Firstly
, as a matter of fact, there are 8 categories of public
transport
which were used in that period of time. In order to be precise, it is essential to note that in 1985 and 2000 the
England
citizens statistically preferred to use
such
kind of travel as just walking, using local busses, taking a train and using other modes.
However
, in comparison with
the
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1985 year, it can be
demonstrated
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a small trend in the usage
long-distance
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busses, which can be a justification for the expansion of the territory of
England
during
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15 years after 1985.
Additionally
, a taxi has become more used among the population at the beginning of the twentieth century, approximately three times more than in 1985. In summary, the lowest trend of the public
transport
system for both two periods in
England
was a bicycle and a taxi.
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