The diagram below shows how one type of coal is used to produce electricity. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how one type of coal is used to produce electricity. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided illustration depicts the process of
electricity
generation from coal.
Overall
, it can be seen that the production consists of several stages, commencing with mining coal and culminating with transferring
electricity
to residential areas and factories. At the beginning of the process, coal is collected at collieries by miners.
This
is followed by the crushing stage where the collected coal is put into a crusher to become smaller pieces before being delivered to the gasifier.
Subsequently
, the crushed coal will be heated and become
gas
. In the subsequent phase, the mentioned
gas
will be cooled in another factory. During
this
step, waste heat will be discharged into the air.
Next,
after the cooled
gas
undergoes the cleaning process, it will be delivered to a
gas
power plant.
This
plant will discharge the waste heat one more time
while
the
electricity
is transferred to citizens and other plants by
electricity
lines.
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