the table below shows stastistics about the top five countries for international tourism in 2012 and 2013.
The table illustrates
informations
about the top Change the wording
information
pieces of information
countries
for global tourism, which are France
, the USA
, Spain, China
and Italy from 2012 to 2013.
In general, what stands out from the table is that the USA
was
the highest amount of tourism spending, Verb problem
had
while
Italy was
the lowest amount of both Verb problem
had
number
of visiters and Correct article usage
the number
having
income from tourists throughout the period. Unnecessary verb
apply
Also
, France
had the most number of tourist
in 2012 and 2013.
It is obvious that all Fix the agreement mistake
tourists
countries
except China
, experienced an upward trend from 2012 to 2013 in the rate of tourists number. Spain witnessed a rapid increase
from 57.5 to 60.7 in 2013. Additionally
, the USA
and France
saw a gradual increase
by
almost 2 Change preposition
of
millions
people. Change to singular
million
Morever
, Italy increased from 46.4 to 47.7 between 2012 and 2013. Correct your spelling
Moreover
China
declined from 57.7 to 55.7 As a result
, four of the countries
saw an upward trend for 1 year.
In addinitonal
, there was an Correct your spelling
addition
increase
for
all Change preposition
in
countries
' tourists
spending. Italy and Fix the agreement mistake
tourist
China
experienced a slight increase
in 2013. While
Spain and France
witnessed a rapid increase
by between
, the Change preposition
apply
USA
skyrocketed from 126.3 billion to 139.6 dollars between 2012 and 2013.Submitted by hsmkashi on
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