The maps show the changes of Nelson city between 2000 and now.

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The given maps

provides

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provide

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information about the alterations made in Nelson from 2000 to

current

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the current

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period.

Overall

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, there was significant development over these years and it was gradually transformed from

small

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a small

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town to

the

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huge

residentual

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residential

area by creating a lot of new facilities. The most noticeable change is

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the

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presence of

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a skyscraper

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skyscraper

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skyscrapers

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on the

norht-west

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northwest

corner. The university and port

was

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have

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remained untouched since now. Trees on the right of the university were replaced by a huge shopping mall.

Train

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The train

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station was moved to the right and expanded. A

trainline

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train line

was launched from

university

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the university

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to the

city

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center

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centre

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Moreover

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, bike rent was added in the

city

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center

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centre

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. The main road has become available only for

pedestrains

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pedestrians

rather than cars. A new large shop was constructed on the west side of the

city

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center

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centre

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instead

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of the old ones.

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, new covered markets were added on the other side of the

city

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center

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centre

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. Below the

pedestrain

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pedestrian

line,

restaurant

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restaurants

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, bars and clubs were built.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words city, center with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

163 words

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