Most of the urgent problems can only be solved with international cooperation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In today's political and

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, many developed

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and global leaders around the world face a plethora of challenges within their own homelands.

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, most of the urgent problems can only be solved with international cooperation. I wholeheartedly agree with

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statement since factors like

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and peacekeeping can only be achieved when nations work together toward a common goal. In recent years, the weather around the world has been more difficult to predict. Winters have gotten colder,

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have gotten warmer.

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has led to more deaths

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for those who are homeless. There

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been incidences of hailstorms, tornadoes or tropical storms in seasons in which they would not normally occur. Scientists and meteorologists attribute the rate

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which these changes are occurring to man-made factors.

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deforestation, industrialization causing more greenhouse gases and

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of non-renewable energy have all been linked to

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. Only with

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working together to sign legislature to limit or reverse these factors can we see a reversal of the harm done to cause

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.

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, with many global conflicts, particularly in the Middle East and Russia, it is important for

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to work together to maintain peace

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of segregating and antagonizing each other. War to advance a country's own interest is harmful to the economy

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and causes death and destruction to many innocent lives. Finding compromise and common ground in order to co-exist harmoniously is what all

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should strive for. In conclusion, most of the urgent matters that directly affect our

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as

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and peacekeeping can only be solved with international cooperation. Whether the country is a global power or a small country, each can do

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part in limiting pollution,

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towards renewable energy, and

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do their part in supporting disarmament,

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and

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policies that are open towards being accepting and accommodating

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different religions and beliefs.