The graph below shows the annual visitor spend for visitors to New Zealand from 5 countries for the years 1996 - 2014

The graph below shows the annual visitor spend for visitors to New Zealand from 5 countries for the years 1996 - 2014
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The provided line chart shows the tourists’ annual spending in New Zealand by their nationalities from 1996 to 2014. There are five countries from different parts of the world.
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, the trends of expenditure by each country fluctuated during the period.
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tourists from Australia spent the highest amount which ranged from 1,000
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in 1996 to 2,000
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in 2014. It reached its peak in 2006 at 2,400
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.
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visitors from the USA paid approximately 800
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in 1996. It gradually increased to 1,600
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in 2010 and
then
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went down to 1,350
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in 2014.
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the UK’s figures decreased from 500
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in 1996 to 200
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in 2002. After that, it dramatically rose to 1,000
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in 2008 and ended up with 900
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in 2014 which was the third highest amount. Japanese and Chinese tourists have low spending amounts compared to others. They spent around 400
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to 600
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in 2014.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • annual expenditure
  • tourism revenue
  • spending trends
  • economic impact
  • visitor spend
  • tourism sector
  • peak spending
  • fluctuations
  • incline/decline in spending
  • monetary contribution
  • tourist demographics
  • economic conditions
  • tourism campaigns
  • statistical analysis
  • data interpretation
  • fiscal year
  • extrapolate data
  • spending patterns
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