Environmental protection is the responsibility of politicians, not individuals as individuals can do too little. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some say that
politicians
should have the responsibility
to protect the environment instead
of individuals
because they hold higher power compared to individuals
. Personally, I partly agree with this
statement because of some major reasons which I shall explain in more detail in this
essay.
To begin
, it is clear that
politicians
play a crucial role in the strategy
of environmental protection
thanks to their power. For example
, in my country if a provincial chairman would like to initiate the protection
strategy
of the eco-system, this
strategy
will be spread to district presidents, then
captains's wards who spread it to residents directly. This
is a perfect human resources system to operate the strategy
smoothly. In addition
, they also
can call funds from the government to make printing productions, social media channels, commercial TV shows, and so on to support the strategy
.
On the other hand
, I believe that the responsibility
of the setting conservation of people also
plays a vital role not less than the politicians
because the power can only control external environmental protection
actions of people; however
, it can not regulate their internal essence. Therefore
, if citizens are aware of the setting security themselves, it will achieve mass effectiveness in the protection
of the safety of surroundings. For instance
, if all residents are aware of the importance of saving energy, reusing and recycling production, avoiding using harmful chemicals in agriculture, stopping cutting trees, and much more, our environment will become free of pollution.
In conclusion, through this
essay, I would like the population to know that both politicians
and individuals
should have the responsibility
to protect the environment. Moreover
, I disagree with the view that environmental protection
is the responsibility
of politicians
, not individuals
as individuals
can do too little.Submitted by writingeilts on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
task achievement
You have provided a clear position on the topic and supported your points with relevant examples. However, consider further elaborating on your main points and examples to add more depth to your essay.
coherence cohesion
In terms of coherence and cohesion, the essay is well-organized with a logical structure, consistent use of linking words, and clear paragraphing. Be cautious of minor grammatical errors and typos that may affect the flow.
introduction conclusion present
Clear and concise introduction and conclusion that effectively frame the essay.
logical structure
Logical structure and good use of linking words to guide the reader through your arguments.
supported main points
Relevant examples that strengthen your argumentation and provide concrete evidence.