The maps below show a bookstore in 2000 and now. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The
shown
map below illustrates Verb problem
apply
a changes
in a Correct the article-noun agreement
changes
a change
bookstore
in 2000 and nowadays.
Overall
,bookstore
became Add an article
the bookstore
more
entertaining centre than it had been in 2000. Correct article usage
a more
Consequently
, it did that by changing fiction
Correct article usage
the fiction
books
part of bookstore
to Add an article
the bookstore
a bookstore
more
personalised and making it more comfortable Add a missing verb
be more
to
Change preposition
for
reader
.
In 2000,near to the entrance,it was more Fix the agreement mistake
readers
fiction
genre
books
type
. On right
Add an article
the right
side
there Add a comma
side,
was
Correct subject-verb agreement
were
also
fiction
genre
novels. In front of entrance
placed Correct article usage
the entrance
a travel
Correct the article-noun agreement
a travel book
travel books
books
, whereas
new books
had been near the service desk. Non-fiction
type
books
placed
right Add a missing verb
are placed
to
art,hobbies and cookery Change preposition
next to
genre
books
.
Nowadays,bookstore
changed noticeably.Fix the agreement mistake
bookstores
For example
, it had replaced whole upside part fiction
genre
books
to
Change preposition
with
the
four section Correct article usage
apply
type
books
. Making it art,hobbies,cookery and fiction
Add a hyphen
fiction-type
type
books
section. Right side
Add a hyphen
Right-side
fiction
books
changed to non-fiction
. Place of the 2000 year art,hobbies and cookery shells changed to tables for the visitors. Moreover
,the down side
non-Correct your spelling
downside
fiction
book shell changed to cafe
,which is in front of tables.Add an article
the cafe
a cafe
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words bookstore, fiction, books, genre, type with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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