The maps below show a bookstore in 2000 and now. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given two maps show modifications in the bookstore between 2000 and 2024.
Overall
,while
the addition of cafe
has Correct article usage
a cafe
clear
changed the store’s arrangement the variety and organization of genres have not been improved or changed
Change the word
clearly
First,
the store now contains a new cafe, which has replaced a long wall that previously shown
fiction books. The Wrong verb form
shows
center
of the room, once Change the spelling
centre
area
Correct article usage
an area
to
the hobbies, art, and cookery sections, is now occupied with tables for the cafe, Change preposition
for
while
the entire non-fiction section has been converted into this
new space. This
notable change has led to in
all genres, except for travel and new books, being moved and combined together in a single section.
Change preposition
apply
Secondly
, the initial view when entering the store stays unchanged. The travel and new book shelves
are still positioned opposite the entrance, and the service desk is still in its first spot at the right corner from Correct your spelling
bookshelves
entrance
.Add an article
the entrance
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