In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think this? What is your opinion of crime fiction and crime dramas?

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There is no denying the fact that the most famous shows and books are

crime

dramas.

This

essay will discuss the reasons behind

this

and express my own opinion of these dramas.

To begin

with, there are many causes for

this

phenomenon.

Firstly

, nowadays many

people

live in old neighbourhoods, so they think that the right place to imagine all kinds of accidents.

In other words

, they may read

crime

stories to increase their awareness and protect themselves,

also

their families.

In addition

on the other hand

, some young

people

love to watch bloody and killing

movies

with their friends, so they feel excited.

Also

, these days romantic

novels

are extremely boring for young

people

For example

, if I work hard all week, and I decide to reward myself, I will read or watch

crime

novels

movies

to feel excited and at the same time curious to know who is the criminal. In terms of my opinion of

crime

dramas, with the huge increasing number of

movies

and

novels

, I consider that because of the rise in events in real life. It is

also

possible to say that

people

want to know how they can think quickly if they see a theft incident or violence in the street.

Moreover

, a lot of new writers write these kinds of stories perfectly.

As a result

, the human brain wants to solve these mysterious stories.

For instance

according to

a study made in the UK in 2020, with the dynamic COVID-19 and quarantine, many

people

meet their bored feelings by reading

crime

novels

and watching a lot of drama

movies

. In conclusion, there are many causes to

people

read

crime

novels

. It is

also

true that

this

behaviour helps

people

and society in various ways.

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While the essay addresses the prompt adequately, it could further elaborate on the reasons for the popularity of crime fiction and crime dramas with more varied examples and deeper analysis.

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Work on expanding your main points and providing specific examples or statistics that further clarify your arguments.

coherence cohesion

The logical structure of the essay is relatively clear, but transitions between paragraphs and within paragraphs could be improved for smoother reading.

coherence cohesion

Ensure each paragraph clearly centers on a single idea and uses effective linking phrases to tie your arguments together.

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The essay successfully provides a clear introduction and conclusion, which helps in framing the discussion effectively.

task achievement

The examples given are relevant and help in supporting your main points.

12
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
4
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

293 words

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